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Ellen Fagan's avatar

I enjoyed this enormously! A witty slice of life that covers so much within its contained structure. Brava!!

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Johanna McCloy's avatar

So glad you enjoyed it! It was a fun little piece to write. Like an improv exercise. I just let the dialog flow. (As mentioned, it was inspired by an actual event, but totally fictional.)

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Ellen Fagan's avatar

Loved it! You were in the zone during the improv for sure; the dialogue had the ring of emotional truth. Great fun, Jo!

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